I Can't Take it Anymore

this is basically a redo of this: [link] (yes, i used yellow paper again XD though this time it was on purpose XD)
i think it's improved a lot : o . . . at least in some ways XD
it still sucks though . . . oh well XD i can work on that
i made the gun lighter, so it didn't stand out as much . . . and increased the emphasis on shading, along with a couple of other things XD
this is the darker version, find the lighter version here: [link]
i hope you like it

EDIT: shoot . . . i forgot something XD . . . so i'm probably going to re-upload a new version of this someday . . . soon XD it's just a little thing . . . a little shading issue XD . . .
thanks for all the feedback on this! ^^